Post by Flamestar on Feb 16, 2009 6:55:03 GMT -5
Name: Flameclaw
Age: 30 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Deputy (since Swiftstar got to leader first -_-)
Personality:
Flameclaw is a fiery, angry and short-tempered kind of cat, but she tries her hardest to not get worked up about pointless things. As an apprentice and kit, she had few friends, since most prefered to keep away from her large temper. When she was made a warrior, her temper settled down slightly, but most cats still keep their distance. Flameclaw still can have friends though, but they'd either have to be as fiery as her or immune to insults and her bursts of anger.
You're probably wondering "Why on earth was she chosen to be deputy with a temper like that, then?". Well, as I mentioned earlier, when Flameclaw became a warrior she learned to control her temper better, and not get worked up over the littlest things. She still hasn't mastered this though, and might still attempt to rip your fur out for taking the mouse she wanted to get. But in battle, her temper comes in useful and powers her to be a great fighter. She never forgives a cat for betraying her or her clan, and she is fiercely loyal, willing to give her life for the good of her clan. It was these aspects that made her deputy.
Description:
Flameclaw's pelt is a fiery orange with faint, paler stripes down her spine. Her fur is short, so she's cool in leafgreen, but cold in leafbare. Her eyes are a bright amber which always make her seem like she's glaring at you. She's sleek and and a relatively fast runner, which makes her a good hunter. Flameclaw got the second part of her name from her claws, which are somewhat longer than the average cat. Whenever in battle, she will always use her speed and her claws to her advantage.
History:
Flameclaw was born and raised in ThunderClan, but her history wasn't tragedy free. Her mother was called Sunshadow and her father Pebblestep. She also has a brother called Rockheart. The two siblings had been closer than you could have ever imagined in kithood, but once they became apprentices, they began to squabble over who was best. They both shared a fiery temper. Flameclaw's mother became ill with greencough, but her children were too busy fighting with eachother to go see her. Eventually, Sunshadow died, and Pebblestep was furious with his kits.
"It was your fault!" he would yowl at his kits out of despair. Rockpaw, who had the worse temper, would argue back, and this soon caused Pebblestep to run away from ThunderClan, angry and confused, never to be seen again.
Soon afterwards, the pair became warriors, but only Flameclaw learned from her mistakes by trying to overcome her temper. Her brother, Rockheart, was now as fiery as ever, but now his anger was more directed at himself than others. It looked like he would never forgive himself for the loss of both parents.
Role-Play Example:
Flameclaw raised her muzzle to scent the air and she caught scent of a mouse. Quickly, she dropped into a hunter's crouch and prowled silently towards her prey. She took every step with great care, avoiding crunchy leaves and small twigs which would give her location away if she stepped on them. Flameclaw could see the mouse now, cleaning itself, oblivious to the fact it was about to be caught. The she-cat pounced, long claws unsheathed, and finished the mouse off with a swift bite to the neck. She smiled, picked her kill up, and buried it for later. This was what she loved about leafgreen; there was never a shortage in prey.
Secret Word: *Eaten by Kitty*
Age: 30 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Deputy (since Swiftstar got to leader first -_-)
Personality:
Flameclaw is a fiery, angry and short-tempered kind of cat, but she tries her hardest to not get worked up about pointless things. As an apprentice and kit, she had few friends, since most prefered to keep away from her large temper. When she was made a warrior, her temper settled down slightly, but most cats still keep their distance. Flameclaw still can have friends though, but they'd either have to be as fiery as her or immune to insults and her bursts of anger.
You're probably wondering "Why on earth was she chosen to be deputy with a temper like that, then?". Well, as I mentioned earlier, when Flameclaw became a warrior she learned to control her temper better, and not get worked up over the littlest things. She still hasn't mastered this though, and might still attempt to rip your fur out for taking the mouse she wanted to get. But in battle, her temper comes in useful and powers her to be a great fighter. She never forgives a cat for betraying her or her clan, and she is fiercely loyal, willing to give her life for the good of her clan. It was these aspects that made her deputy.
Description:
Flameclaw's pelt is a fiery orange with faint, paler stripes down her spine. Her fur is short, so she's cool in leafgreen, but cold in leafbare. Her eyes are a bright amber which always make her seem like she's glaring at you. She's sleek and and a relatively fast runner, which makes her a good hunter. Flameclaw got the second part of her name from her claws, which are somewhat longer than the average cat. Whenever in battle, she will always use her speed and her claws to her advantage.
History:
Flameclaw was born and raised in ThunderClan, but her history wasn't tragedy free. Her mother was called Sunshadow and her father Pebblestep. She also has a brother called Rockheart. The two siblings had been closer than you could have ever imagined in kithood, but once they became apprentices, they began to squabble over who was best. They both shared a fiery temper. Flameclaw's mother became ill with greencough, but her children were too busy fighting with eachother to go see her. Eventually, Sunshadow died, and Pebblestep was furious with his kits.
"It was your fault!" he would yowl at his kits out of despair. Rockpaw, who had the worse temper, would argue back, and this soon caused Pebblestep to run away from ThunderClan, angry and confused, never to be seen again.
Soon afterwards, the pair became warriors, but only Flameclaw learned from her mistakes by trying to overcome her temper. Her brother, Rockheart, was now as fiery as ever, but now his anger was more directed at himself than others. It looked like he would never forgive himself for the loss of both parents.
Role-Play Example:
Flameclaw raised her muzzle to scent the air and she caught scent of a mouse. Quickly, she dropped into a hunter's crouch and prowled silently towards her prey. She took every step with great care, avoiding crunchy leaves and small twigs which would give her location away if she stepped on them. Flameclaw could see the mouse now, cleaning itself, oblivious to the fact it was about to be caught. The she-cat pounced, long claws unsheathed, and finished the mouse off with a swift bite to the neck. She smiled, picked her kill up, and buried it for later. This was what she loved about leafgreen; there was never a shortage in prey.
Secret Word: *Eaten by Kitty*
